I've been posting my poetry on urbis.com and in my myspace blog, so I thought I would start posting a few here....
Lemme know what you think...

invisible hands.

choking me.

crying out.

i can't see.

trying to reach.

keeping calm.

slowly slipping.

won't see the dawn.

warm air now cold.

i can see my breath.

praying to God.

fearing the death.

where is my savior?

who is this i feel?

why can't i see you?

is this real?

who is this so angry and alone?

why are they still here?

Why won't they leave me be?

Who is this i fear?

wish i was dreaming.

i can't see the light.

i can't remember happiness.

i won't last the night.

suddenly alone.

gasping, breathing.

i don't know what to do.

knowing it is seething.

invisible hands.

choking me.

crying out.

i can't see.

trying to reach.

keeping calm.

slowly slipping.